First, to improve the logic of your proof, you don't want to put the thing that you are trying to prove, $P(k+1) = (2)(3)+(2)(3)(4)+(3)(4)(5)+\cdots+(k+1)(k+2)(k+3)= \frac{(k+1)(k+2)(k+3)(k+4)}{4}$ at the beginning of (the second part of) your proof. Same goes for the base case where you you are trying to show that the left and right side both equal 6, but you are doing them in parallel. Try either:
$P(1)= 1(1+1)(1+2) = 6 = \frac{1(1+1)(1+2)(1+3)}{4}$
or
$P(1)= 1(1+1)(1+2) = 6$
and
$\frac{1(1+1)(1+2)(1+3)}{4} = 6$
Now for the actual proof:
We have $\sum_{j=1}^{n}j(j+1)(j+2)=\frac{n(n+1)(n+2)(n+3)}{4}$. Now take $\sum_{j=1}^{n+1}j(j+1)(j+2)=\sum_{j=1}^{n}j(j+1)(j+2) + (n+1)(n+2)(n+3)$
and by the inductive hypothesis
$\sum_{j=1}^{n}j(j+1)(j+2) + (n+1)(n+2)(n+3) = \frac{n(n+1)(n+2)(n+3)}{4} + (n+1)(n+2)(n+3) = \frac{n(n+1)(n+2)(n+3)+4(n+1)(n+2)(n+3)}{4}=\frac{(n+4)(n+1)(n+2)(n+3)}{4}$ which concludes our proof.
It is generally not a good idea to expand your sums like this $(2)(3)+(2)(3)(4)+(3)(4)(5)+\cdots+(k+1)(k+2)(k+3)$. It is sometimes helpful for spotting patterns like telescoping sums, but it generally turns into a mess.