I agree with the comments posted so far. However, there is another issue.
Let $E_1$ denote the event that the armour prevents ammo loss.
Let $E_2$ denote the event that the gun prevents ammo loss.
For any two events, $R,S$, let $(R,S)$ denote the event that both events $R$ and $S$ simultaneously occur.
For any event $R$, let $R'$ denote the complementary event that event $R$ did not occur.
You made a mistake in your analysis.
Given events $E_1, E_2$, there are $4$ mutually exclusive ways that the two events might interact with each other:
- $(E_1, E_2)$
- $(E_1, E_2')$
- $(E_1', E_2)$
- $(E_1', E_2')$.
Of the $4$ possible events, the only one that has the ammo loss not being prevented, is the last one.
So, the probability that ammo was not lost is
$$1 - p(E_1',E_2').\tag1 $$
which equals
$$p(E_1,E_2) + p(E_1,E_2') + p(E_1',E_2) ~=~ ~\text{[for example]}~~ p(E_1) + p(E_1',E_2). \tag2 $$
You assumed that the expression in (2) above was equal to
$$p(E_1) + p(E_2).$$
You can see, from the RHS of (2), that this is wrong.
In order to determine the probability that the ammo is not lost, you have to evaluate either (1) above or (2) above.
As others have pointed out, there is insufficient information to determine this.
Suppose that it was given that events $E_1$ and $E_2$ were independent. This would imply that events $E_1',E_2'$ were independent.
Then, you could calculate
$p(E_1',E_2') = p(E_1') \times p(E_2') = \dfrac{4}{5} \times \dfrac{2}{3} = \dfrac{8}{15}.$
This would imply that the expression in (1) above evaluates to $\dfrac{7}{15}.$
More specifically, while you are given $p(E_1)$ and $p(E_2)$, you are not given either $p(E_2|E_1)$ or $p(E_2|E_1')$.
In other words, you know the $p(E_2)$, but you do not know the probability of event $E_2$ occurring under (for example) the assumption that event $E_1$ does not occur.