While reading "Mathematical Analysis I" by Vladimir A. Zorich. I came across this proof regarding the irrationality of $\sqrt{2}$ :
Let $X$ and $Y$ be the sets of positive real numbers such that $\forall x \in X\left(x^{2}<2\right)$ $\forall y \in Y\left(2<y^{2}\right) .$ Since $1 \in X$ and $2 \in Y,$ it follows that $X$ and $Y$ are nonempty sets. Further, since $(x<y) \Leftrightarrow\left(x^{2}<y^{2}\right)$ for positive numbers $x$ and $y,$ every element of $X$ is less than every element of $Y .$ By the completeness axiom there exists $s \in \mathbb{R}$ such that $x \leq s \leq y$ for all $x \in X$ and all $y \in Y$ We shall show that $s^{2}=2$ If $s^{2}<2,$ then, for example, the number $s+\frac{2-s^{2}}{3 s},$ which is larger than $s,$ would have a square less than $2 .$ Indeed, we know that $1 \in X,$ so that $1^{2} \leq s^{2}<2,$ and $0<\Delta:=2-s^{2} \leq 1 .$ It follows that :
$$ \boxed{\left(s+\frac{\Delta}{3 s}\right)^{2}=s^{2}+2 \cdot \frac{\Delta}{3 s}+\left(\frac{\Delta}{3 s}\right)^{2}<s^{2}+3 \cdot \frac{\Delta}{3 s}<s^{2}+3 \cdot \frac{\Delta}{3 s}=s^{2}+\Delta=2} $$
The author made a simple mistake during the expansion as seen in the box above. Therefore, I attempt to fix the proof as follow :
Since $1 \leq s^2$ and $\frac{\Delta}{3}<1$ hold, then :
\begin{align*}
\left(s+\frac{\Delta}{3s}\right)^2&=s^2+2\cdot\frac{\Delta}{3}+\left(\frac{\Delta}{3s}\right)^2\\
&\leq s^2+2\cdot\frac{\Delta}{3}+\left(\frac{\Delta}{3}\right)^2\\
&<s^2+2\cdot\frac{\Delta}{3}+\frac{\Delta}{3}\\
&= s^2+3\cdot\frac{\Delta}{3}\\
&=s^2+\Delta \\
&= 2
\end{align*}
Hence, $(s+\frac{\Delta}{3s})^2<2$ is true as required.
Are my steps correct in my attempt to fix this part of the proof?