Wanted to know if I am heading in the right direction with my deductions or where I am getting messed up.
You are not. $p\wedge q$ should not be derived from assumptions of $p$ and $q$, it should be the assumption.
Always keep an eye on the goal.
You wish to prove $(p\wedge q)\to r$ from the premise $(p\to r)\vee (q\to r)$.
Therefore assume $p\wedge q$ aiming to derive $r$. To derive that, use a proof by cases.
$\begin{array}{|l}(p\to r)\vee(q\to r)\\\hline\begin{array}{|l} p\wedge q\\\hline\begin{array}{|l}p\to r\\\hline\vdots\\ r\end{array}\\\begin{array}{|l}q\to r\\\hline\vdots\\r \end{array}\\r\end{array}\\(p\wedge q)\to r\end{array}$