The Maclaurin series definition isn't quite right. Instead, it should be $$\sum_{n=0}^\infty\frac{F^{(n)}(0)}{n!}x^n.$$ Consequently, we should have $$\left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)^{-4}=\sum_{n=0}^\infty\frac{(n+3)!}{5^n\cdot n!}x^n$$ by the work that you've already done.
However, noting that $$(n+3)!=(n+3)\cdot(n+2)\cdot(n+1)\cdot n!,$$ we can write it instead as $$\left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)^{-4}=\sum_{n=0}^\infty\frac{(n+3)(n+2)(n+1)}{5^n}x^n.$$
One way we can see that there must be something involving $x$ in the series is that $\left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)^{-4}$ varies in value with different $x$ values, while $\sum_{n=0}^\infty\frac{(n+3)!}{5^n\cdot n!}$ is simply a constant--in particular, it turns out to be $$\left(1-\frac{1}{5}\right)^{-4}=\left(\frac45\right)^{-4}=\left(\frac54\right)^4=\frac{5^4}{4^4}=\frac{625}{256}.$$
Added: It seems that you've made an error in calculating the derivatives, unfortunately.
$$F'(x)=-4\cdot\left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)^{-5}\cdot\frac{d\left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)}dx=\frac15\cdot 4\cdot\left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)^{-5}$$
$$F''(x)=-5\cdot\frac15\cdot 4\cdot\left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)^{-6}\cdot\frac{d\left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)}{dx}=\frac1{5^2}\cdot 5\cdot 4\cdot\left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)^{-6}$$
$$F'''(x)=-6\cdot\frac15\cdot 5\cdot 4\cdot\left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)^{-7}\cdot\frac{d\left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)}{dx}=\frac1{5^3}\cdot 6\cdot 5\cdot 4\cdot\left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)^{-7}$$
and more generally, for $n\ge 4,$ we have $$F^{(n)}(x)=\frac1{5^n}\cdot(n+3)\cdot(n+2)\cdots 5\cdot 4\cdot\left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)^{-(n+4)}=\frac{1}{5^n}\cdot\frac{(n+3)!}{3!}\cdot \left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)^{-(n+4)}.$$
Thus, $$F^{(n)}(0)=\frac{(n+3)!}{5^n\cdot 3!}$$ for each $n,$ and so the Maclaurin series is $$\left(1-\frac{x}{5}\right)^{-4}=\sum_{n=0}^\infty\frac{(n+3)!}{5^n\cdot 3!\cdot n!}x^n=\sum_{n=0}^\infty\frac{(n+3)(n+2)(n+1)}{5^n\cdot 3!}x^n.$$