Following your notation $\alpha_1=n^{1/4}$, $\alpha_2=-n^{1/4}$, $\alpha_3=in^{1/4}$, $\alpha_4=-in^{1/4}$, where $n$ is a square-free integer larger than 1.
An element $\sigma$ of the Galois group is fully determined, once we know $\sigma(\alpha_1)$ and $\sigma(i)$. The former can be any one of the roots, and the latter can be either $i$ or $-i$. The general theory tells us (presumably covered in your class notes) that there are altogether eight elements in the Galois group, so all choices are possible (this is not always the case, when a field extension is described by a list of generating elements).
You have written down most of the automorphisms correctly. I spotted the following two mistakes, so I cover them in detail. [Edit: These errors have since been corrected by the OP. The following is thus somewhat obsolete now, but still serves as an example in how to get the permutation of roots given the action of the automorphism on the generators of the field extension.]
The choices $\sigma(\alpha_1)=\alpha_3$, $\sigma(i)=i$ mean that:
$$
\sigma(\alpha_2)=\sigma(-\alpha_1)=-\sigma(\alpha_1)=-\alpha_3=\alpha_4,
$$
$$
\sigma(\alpha_3)=\sigma(i\alpha_1)=\sigma(i)\sigma(\alpha_1)=i\alpha_3=\alpha_2,$$
and
$$\sigma(\alpha_4)=\sigma(-i)\sigma(\alpha_1)=-i\alpha_3=\alpha_1.$$
Thus this automorphism permutes the roots according to the 4-cycle
$$
\alpha_1\mapsto\alpha_3\mapsto\alpha_2\mapsto\alpha_4\mapsto\alpha_1
$$
or in other words $\sigma=(1 3 2 4)$. Thus $\sigma$ is your automorphism $\sigma_5$.
The other error was with your $\sigma_7$. It is actually the inverse of the above $\sigma=\sigma_5$. It is similarly determined from the data $\sigma_7(i)=i$, $\sigma_7(\alpha_1)=\alpha_4$, and the corresponding permutation is then $(1 4 2 3)$.
Note that these 8 permutations are the symmetries of the square, if the numbering of corners is such that $1$ and $2$ as well as $3$ and $4$ are diagonally opposite. Draw a picture where you plot the roots in the complex plane to see this! The permutation $(1 2)$
must map $\alpha_1\mapsto\alpha_3=-\alpha_1$, but it must also map $\alpha_2=i\alpha_1$ to itself, so it must map $i\mapsto -i$. The permutation $(3 4)$ that interchanges the two imaginary roots is just the usual complex conjugation.
A subgroup missing from your list is the Klein 4-group consisting of the permutations
$$
V_4=\{\sigma_1,\sigma_3,\sigma_6,\sigma_8=\sigma_3\sigma_6\}=\langle \sigma_3,\sigma_6\rangle.
$$