The exercise is:
Suppose $v_1, \ldots , v_m$ is linearly independent in $V$ and $w \in V$. Prove that if $v_1+w, \ldots, v_m+w$ is linearly dependent, then $w \in \operatorname{span}(v_1, \ldots, v_m)$.
My proof:
Since $v_1+w, \ldots, v_m+w$ is linearly dependent, we have for $a_1, \ldots, a_m \in F$ and not all equal to zero, $a_1(v_1+w) + \ldots + a_m(v_m+w) = 0$. If we let $c = -(a_1+ \ldots + a_m)$, we then find that $a_1v_1 + \ldots + a_m v_m = cw$.
First we consider the case where $c \neq 0$. Solving the equation above for $w$, we get $w = \frac{a_1}{c}v_1 + \ldots + \frac{a_m}{c}v_m$, making it an element of $\operatorname{span}(v_1, \ldots, v_m)$. If $c=0$, then we have $a_1v_1 + \ldots + a_mv_m = 0$, contradicting our first assumption that the list $v_1, \ldots, v_m$ is linearly independent. Therefore $c\neq0$, and the proof is complete.
Is this proof correct? How could I improve it? Thanks for any help.